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Three little fillies, named Sweetie, Scoots and Bloom

Had a dilemma that caused them much gloom

All around them were foals with marks on their flanks

But to the fillies’ dismay, their rear ends were blank

So they banded together in their quest for their marks

In hopes that their findings would set them apart

They scuba, they pet sit, they do ponies’ hair

They crusade if the weather is nasty or fair

They zipline and try to help ponies find love

They rain terror on Ponyville left, right and above

Perhaps one day their journey will come to an end

But regardless  these fillies will still remain friends

Their friendship will bind them wherever they go

A sisterhood lasting past the end of the show
Part of a series of poems I'm doing inspired by :iconsophiecabra:'s MLP Portrait Series. [link]
Image belongs to :iconsophiecabra:.

I wanted the CMC poem to have kind of a nursery rhyme vibe to it. My brain kept trying to go back to a different rhyming scheme and it was difficult to stay on track.
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TheAwesomeKk Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013

"Their friendship will bind them wherever they go

A sisterhood lasting past the end of the show"

 

I don't know why, but this line really touched me, and this thought made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.

I'm not one to be touched at something as simple as a poem, I rarely even get emotional at poetry. Well done, a really good poem.

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FireWolfCorvinus Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Artist
<3
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